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"The Long Road" Chapter one- The Breakthrough
12-21-2008, 09:17 PM
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Re: "The Long Road" Chapter one- The Breakthrough
A thin smile curved across the femme's lips. Sly yellow optics peered at them from the shadows. She approached them carefully,knowing that every moment could be her last. He smile broadened as one of them came running towards her. She pretended not to notice,but watched them through the side of one optic.

As the running one neared her,she waved,smiling broadly. She didn't want to make the wrong impression...

(Sorry,I edited this a little to give some more interaction room. Where the slag is everyone?!)

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Re: "The Long Road" Chapter one- The Breakthrough - Elita-1 - 12-21-2008 09:17 PM

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